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day afer day we live our lifes,
day after day we say it's allright,
day after day we live our lies,
day after day we lose more sight.

do you hear my words?
I bet you do.
will you consider them?
doubtfull.
then I'll say it anyways.

day after day we bury the pain,
day after day we stay the same.
day after day it will never change,
day after day we become less sane.

unles we change,
day after day.
can we change?
©2006-2010 ~six-ugly
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Though I don't agree with some things, it was fixed with the last stanza. I like your writing. ^__^
:iconsix-ugly:
thanks ^___^.
what did you not a gree with?

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I realised that everyone has a mask. I realised we all have our hells. Above all, I realised that though humans are infinite in thought, we live in singularity of process. We all know this, what's spectacular is that we ignore it. choose to do so.
:iconunravellingdarkness:
Just how you said we stay the same and we never change. But the ending fixed it I think. ^__^;
:iconsix-ugly:
ahh, alright ^___^.
and in some cases I am right. nothing changes unless you make it change. for some people at least.

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I realised that everyone has a mask. I realised we all have our hells. Above all, I realised that though humans are infinite in thought, we live in singularity of process. We all know this, what's spectacular is that we ignore it. choose to do so.
:iconunravellingdarkness:
Ah yeah. That makes more sense.
:iconsix-ugly:
^__^

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I realised that everyone has a mask. I realised we all have our hells. Above all, I realised that though humans are infinite in thought, we live in singularity of process. We all know this, what's spectacular is that we ignore it. choose to do so.
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very profound, indeed
:iconsix-ugly:
thanks ^__^

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I realised that everyone has a mask. I realised we all have our hells. Above all, I realised that though humans are infinite in thought, we live in singularity of process. We all know this, what's spectacular is that we ignore it. choose to do so.

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